Friday, December 4, 2009

The Poor Flower by Tapanga (2nd Grade)

There was a flower in the grass. The bees were swarming around it. The poor flower. That has to hurt! It would hurt me. The end.

4 comments:

Bethanie said...

Tapanga, your story is very creative! What inspired you to write it?

Stacey the Fat Girl said...

Thank you for the comment. I was working hard to make it up. I just saw some flowers in my garden, and I thought of the bees swarming around it.

-quote from Tapanga

Stacey the Fat Girl said...

Tapanga - this was a great story. You should be an author when you grow up.

-Miss Stacey

Ms. Megan said...

Tapanga says, "I don't know how I came up with this. One day I was working in my garden and just figured it out!"
Love, Tapanga